eynia wrote, On the positive side, the author packs in a tremendous amount of information. The information proceeds logically and in small steps. The reader’s voice is good. On the somewhat distracting side for me, the author was writing for too broad an audience. A readership and listenership that requires physics to be explained in tidbits cannot also absorb a string of barely-familiar language in explanations. The same comment can be made for the reader. He did a good job of reading, but someone new to the material cannot absorb it well enough when it is read like a novel. Pauses are needed. At appropriate times the pace needs to be slowed. These are my primary comments.

posted May 1, 2010 at 2:29PM

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